I wanted to make a painting for the Dorran family, one of Ravel’s wealthiest families.

Their ancestors helped build the city. Today they own quarries, building contracts and a great deal of land. I wanted their home to tell us something about them before anybody spoke.

What would they put on the wall? What would they want a visitor to admire?

To answer that, I had to go back into their history. A family with this much money and influence didn’t get there yesterday.

That brought me to Haren Dorran, the ancestor at the centre of the painting. He was a successful military commander who saved his quartermaster’s life during a war. She organised the army’s supplies.

He later became a governor, applied military supply rules to ordinary households, and punished people who couldn’t comply. He was eventually removed.

His descendants have a real act of courage to celebrate, and a later disgrace they would probably rather not discuss. I could see why they might commission a huge painting of the rescue. Show visitors the heroic ancestor. Give them the family’s version of what deserves to be remembered.

The first paintings weren’t getting there.

I’ll be honest: I was underwhelmed by the earlier paintings. Too many looked like a page from the comic had been put on cloth. These are two of those explorations.

An earlier painting of two hands passing a bowl across three unequal wooden panels.
A shared meal, reduced to the gesture of passing a bowl.
An earlier painting shows a crooked tree fork supporting a floor through ceramic bearings, across three cloth panels.
A crooked tree fork supporting a building. The picture stays close to a technical illustration.

The subjects had reasons to exist. But I wanted the art to feel as though someone living in this world had made it. Someone with opinions. Someone who might exaggerate a face, bend a landscape or make a hero absurdly large because that was how they wanted him remembered.

I’d spent all this time thinking about the civilization and was being far too cautious with its art. I wanted more risk, more distortion, more life in the writing and the brushwork. I kept the earlier pieces, but changed the direction.

Haren gave that change a purpose. His descendants would be paying for the picture. The painter didn’t need to be fair to everyone in it.

Two drawings, one commission
Second ink drawing: roots become broad curled ribbons, the road becomes two flat bands, and repeated figures make Haren’s enormous scale more emphatic.
Second drawing. The road flattens into bands; the roots become broad, curling shapes.

The first banner drawing already had a huge Haren. But the road on the right still winds into the distance, and the tangled roots are carefully described. It shows the scene. I wanted it to push the family’s version harder.

In the second drawing, the road becomes two flat bands. People turn into small, repeated silhouettes. The roots become great black curls. Almost everything around Haren now helps make him look enormous.

With that drawing settled, I moved to colour: red on his coat, teal across the roads, black roots against ochre. I wanted the painting to catch the eye from across the room, with smaller figures to discover when you came closer. One of them matters quite a lot.

Detail of the banner: the small rescued figure looks up towards Haren, their hands joined.
Haren and the quartermaster whose life he saved.

The person his family might rather leave out.

The quartermaster whose life Haren saved later publicly demanded his removal as governor. She still credited him with saving her. She also opposed what he was doing to the people he governed.

That gives them a history together before they become opponents. Her gratitude is real. So is her reason to distrust him. A later generation of Dorrans even builds a public stair in her honour, though several relatives dislike attending its anniversary.

The world has to exist before our heroes arrive.

This keeps happening as I build Verdant. I add a painting, a tool, a piece of clothing, a way of writing, and it sends me back into the past. Who made it? Who could afford it? Why did someone want it badly enough to pay for it, keep it, pass it down?

A wall needs people to build it and someone to pay for the work. In the Dorrans’ history, building walls created safe ground for homes. The family received leases as payment. Those leases became wealth that their descendants still benefit from. Now the architecture tells me something about who has power, and why.

The painting does the same thing. It gives me a family trying to control how people remember an ancestor. It also gives me people who know perfectly well what they’re leaving out.

I can imagine a wealthy guest admiring this huge banner, being very polite about it, then laughing about it on the way home. The Dorrans are trying to make everyone remember the hero. Their guests may spend the evening discussing the disgraced governor instead. That is an expensive way to give people something to gossip about.

Nothing in that possible encounter needs one of our heroes to start it. The pride, the discomfort and the reasons to take sides are already there. When we pick up the story, the characters enter a world where other people have been living, building, helping each other and falling out for hundreds of years. Their choices have somewhere to come from.

I don’t need to explain all of that every time a character walks into a room. But I want to know enough that the room, the people in it and the way they treat each other make sense. A painting can quietly do some of that work.

I love this part. The scale of it also scares the hell out of me. My brain is overheating over generations of family politics, and I’m still supposed to be choosing things for a living room.

And this is what else is on the desk.

One painting has a lot of neighbours.

A Dorran courtyard study
ArchitectureA Dorran courtyard study
A fan made as a gift
ObjectsA fan made as a gift
An imagined First Teacher
BeliefAn imagined First Teacher
The civic watch’s removable tab
PoliticsThe civic watch’s removable tab
Sava’s funeral clothes
ClothingSava’s funeral clothes
Pell, away from work
CharactersPell, away from work
Ravel, one city in progress
The worldRavel, one city in progress

Existing studies from across the project. Clothes, objects, beliefs, public authority, homes, people and the city around them. All still being worked on.

About these studies

The courtyard is a roof-map study. The fan, sacred print and watch tab are individual design proposals. The character and clothing studies retain their original scoped selections. The city view records an earlier assembly with known detail loss; it is not a completed map or proof of the later height model. Open each image to see the full study.

VERDANT WILDS Notes from a fantasy world in progress.

Sources & making

This piece adapts Guillaume’s recorded Art & Craft decisions into a first-person essay. The wording is an editorial reconstruction, not a verbatim diary or conversation transcript. Haren’s rescue, civilian rule, removal and the later stair come from the worldbook’s history and family chapters. The three Dorran portraits are visual explorations, not settled character biographies. The imagined guest’s reaction is a possibility raised in the creator’s latest feedback, not an established scene.

The banner is a proposed later family commission. Its battle scene and likeness are an artist’s interpretation within the fiction. Its inscription is expressive lettering, not a verified transcription of the world’s language.

The existing artwork was generated with GPT Image under Guillaume Defer’s direction, through an ink review followed by colour. The world, visual development and this editorial draft were developed with AI assistance. This page reuses the original images. The earlier paintings are retained studies from before the art-direction change, not failed versions of the Haren banner. The close view uses the same colour study and keeps the quartermaster’s whole depicted figure visible.

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